Religion question
I am looking for research and analysis. A primary source will be important. You also may want to check out Youtube and watch some sort of service and incorporate that into it. I will be more lenient with this since this is a major change to a large assignment but this assignment should still be formal, written free of grammatical errors and informative. A thesis statement should guide the paper.
Final Paper:
Please choose one religion from the class/text to further develop. Remember to explain the topic in accordance with the academic discipline of humanities
5 paragraph essay (introduction, 3 supporting paragraphs and a conclusion)
I am looking for a developed Thesis that is supported with evidence in the Body of the paper. This paper also needs citations when a source is used. Citations should be present in the Body of the paper.
Choose at least 2 outside references other than your text to include in the Bibliography.
Category
Exceeds Standard
Meets Standard
Nearly Meets Standard
Does Not Meet Standard
No Evidence
Score
Title Page
Title
Your Name, Teachers Name, Course Period,
Date, Neatly finished-no errors
Evidence of four
Evidence of 3
Evidence of 2 or less
Absent
5
Thesis Statement
Clearly and concisely states the papers purpose in a single sentence, which is engaging, and thought provoking.
Clearly states the papers purpose in a single sentence.
States the papers purpose in a single sentence.
Incomplete and/or unfocused.
Absent, no evidence
20
Introduction
The introduction is engaging, states the main topic and previews the structure of the paper.
The introduction states the main topic and previews the structure of the paper.
The introduction states the main topic but does not adequately preview the structure of the paper.
There is no clear introduction or main topic and the structure of the paper is missing.
Absent, no evidence
10
Body
Each paragraph has thoughtful supporting detail sentences that develop the main idea.
Each paragraph has sufficient supporting detail sentences that develop the main idea.
Each paragraph lacks supporting detail sentences.
Each paragraph fails to develop the main idea.
Not applicable
20
Organization- Structural Development of the Idea
Writer demonstrates logical and subtle sequencing of ideas through well-developed paragraphs; transitions are used to enhance organization.
Paragraph development present but not perfected.
Logical organization; organization of ideas not fully developed.
No evidence of structure or organization.
Not applicable
10
Conclusion
The conclusion is engaging and restates the thesis.
The conclusion restates the thesis.
The conclusion does not adequately restate the thesis.
Incomplete and/or unfocused.
Absent
10
Mechanics
No errors in punctuation, capitalization and spelling.
Almost no errors in punctuation, capitalization and spelling.
Many errors in punctuation, capitalization and spelling.
Numerous and distracting errors in punctuation, capitalization and spelling.
Not applicable
5
Usage
No errors sentence structure and word usage.
Almost no errors in sentence structure and word usage.
Many errors in sentence structure and word usage.
Numerous and distracting errors in sentence structure and word usage.
Not applicable
5
Citation
All cited works, both text and visual, are done in the correct format with no errors.
Some cited works, both text and visual, are done in the correct format. Inconsistencies evident.
Few cited works, both text and visual, are done in the correct format.
Absent
Not applicable
10
Bibliography
Done in the correct format with no errors. Includes more than 1 major references- not including the text (e.g. journal articles, books, but no more than two internet sites. No Wikipedia or Encyclopedia)
Done in the correct format with few errors. .
Done in the correct format with some errors. Includes less than the required references
Done in the correct format with many errors and less than the required references.
Absent or the only sites are internet sites.
5
